Chapter Four: Scene Two of Hada’s Fog is posted now.
In Chapter One, flying to California for a lengthy stay to resolve their sons’ disagreement is the inciting incident for Hada. It jump-starts the plot and changes her world. It stirs up trouble in her marriage. Her strong objection changes the status quo and jolts her out of her traditional wife role. For the first time in her married life, she mentally separates herself from Lev, which causes her to think of ways to physically get away from him and the siblings’ chaos.
Although Abe is not the main character, what happens in this chapter is an inciting incident for him. He has to make quick decisions from an emotionally painful place.
If you were in his situation, how would you react?
